yy1537 发表于 2012-1-20 04:35   全显示 1楼
看了楼主写的三章，就像楼上一位兄弟说的那样，没有大荤，也给点小荤。除了这一点之外，从故事的架构，到情节的展开，楼主都是把握的不错，越是到后面这种感觉就越明显。从第一，到第二，再到第三很明显的可以看出楼主自己慢慢进到了故事里了。在第二的时候，在小倩旁边那一段要是能够来得细一点就好了，那可以最让人期待的地方了。
楼主辛苦了，红心献上
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