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[小天龙] 【都市凌香录】（第一章温馨小屋 暗夜流香）

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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2011-9-6 23:31  显示全部帖子
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个人感觉17-25岁的猪脚肯定是去当兵啊这类了,看起来这篇小说还是很有看头的,不过我建议还是加多点过度的情节,断断都是肉戏的话就没什么意思了,其实最好就是加点那些女主的内心变化描写,最后希望不要是绿帽就好

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