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[离任作者] 【大李老李和小李】--11(表弟一家的放纵史[上])

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Incest and Adultery novels are very common read by most of the readers. The reasons are due to human nature's sense of curiosity to look for something new from the normal sex life and the strange feeling of peeping the abnormal sex relationship of abultery and incests.

But as they are so many novels of such nature available in the markets, the readers will look for such novels with extraordinary excellent writings with new exploring sex arousing materials. Otherwise they will find them dull and uninteresting.

This story basically is quite well written. At least we have a well presented plot. There are incest relationships among the Li Family. But it seems to fall in the same presentation of the other similar writings: straight foreward and flat story telling. Even this story is talking about incest, the readers will not be very much moved by the story.

The style of writing, is however quite new. The incest between a woman and her younger brother in law is depicted by the woman  herself. She told the story as the first person so the readers will be easier to make themselves to be identified with her. She is not very clearly characterized. We are not given a real physical picture of how the woman really looks like. How tall she is, what her figures are and how does she look like, what is she in the family etc have not been given. We only know that she is a very wanton woman, as she keeps on making violated incest sex relationships with her family members.

Her story telling is nothing special as well. She just retells what has happened when she is seduced by her younger brother-in-law and has sex relationship with him later on. When I say there is nothing special, I mean the presentation of the love making between them is a bit too shallow. There are descriptions of some references of love making. But the detailed processes of love making have been missed out. The usual female's sex reponses in such a abnormal sex act has not been clearly presented. What are the response of the male and the female in loving making is also slightly touched. This is to some extent not satisfactory to some readers. These readers, especially those who have got accumstomed to such nature of writings, will look for something with some unexpected sex excitements very explicit descriptions. But not in this novel. They can only find some straight forward descriptions which fail to go into the very bottom of the hearts of the readers who cannot identified with the characters in this story.

This is perhaps something to do with the control of language of the writer. We need some more mature vocabularies to give a good presentation of the characters features, well composed sentence structures and appropriate choice of dictions to expose the real sex making in this story.

This novel, however, has a wonderful topic: " The Lis' Families - Incests and Adulteries ". This topic immediately has attracted the attention of the readers especially those who are especially interested in reading such types of novels.

Whether the contents are interesting or not. It at least has attracted the readers' interest to have a look at the story.

For those who are not particularyly picky about style of writing, this novel is basically a good novel which worths enjoyiing with pleasure.
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